Monday, June 4, 2012

मुखौटे

चहरे ये मुखौटे हैं,
मुखौटे ही तो चहरे हैं |
अन्दर का राम जला दिया,
कैसे उल्टे पड़े दशहरे हैं |
अपनी ही आवाज़ सुन ना पाएं,
पूर्ण रूप से बहरे हैं |
मन की नदी उफान पा ना सकी,
पर हम दिखते कितने गहरे हैं|
ये मुखौटे कोई उतार ना ले,
लगा दिए लाखों पहरे हैं |
चहरे ये मुखौटे हैं,
मुखौटे ही तो चहरे हैं |

34 comments:

  1. very well written..way to go!

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  2. nice sir..very relevant in the present scenario..:)

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  3. Wah wah ji!!!! Badiya likthe ho aap. Loved it:):) Superb:) Awesome!

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  4. reminds me of "Ye ssaye hain, ye dunia hai" by Gulzar..

    We written one.. hope to see many more like this..

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  5. kai dino baad sune
    vichar jo itne gehre hain

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  6. The topic is deep and pensive and the words just right to get u thinking. Good one! :)

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  7. Hi bro, please move your blog to WordPress!

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  8. veere bahut wadhiya likheya hai... keep it up ;-)

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  9. amazing ayushmann keep it up!

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  10. thats nice....keep it up...!!!

    Vishal
    http://bindassvoice.blogspot.in/

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  11. me likey likey,,,,its so nice,,,,
    "yahi to hamari kali ratoon kay raaz gaharey hai"
    waiting for anothe1

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  12. loved it Ayushmann

    intense!

    What I love about you
    are these pleasant surprises in the form of lovely words



    :-)love the flow of it
    Mysterious Aa-You!
    dil se likhna hamesha

    touches the heart completely !

    KaavyTigress -Kaveri Gopakumar twitter :-)

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  13. Awesome Ayushmann ji !

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  14. Nice overall effort..
    But would like to say that it should be either all shuddh Hindi or all urdu/saral hindi..
    Your entire stuff is in Urdu/Saral Hindi and that one line is Shuddh Hindi "Purna Roop se Behre hain"..
    It could have been "poori tarah se behre hain" and the efect would have been same...
    Love..

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  15. u r just amazing can't explain it!!!!!

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  16. Hey write English version na pls i wud love to read.
    I wud b glad to c u visit my blog.
    auankitha.blogspot.com

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  17. nice read!! I like to write too. (in English though)
    wrote somewhat similar sometime back
    http://through-my-pen.blogspot.in/2011/09/masquerade-copyright2011.html

    Criticism is welcome!

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  18. Poetic SPERM.. lol.. gr8 job !!

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  19. Hey Ayushmann I'm going to post something here what I just wrote. I am not good at it still want to share it with you:

    Ik azadi mili thi tb,,, jb hua inqalab ka aagaz...

    Ik azadi mili thi tb,,, jb huye shaheed jaanbaaz...

    Ik desh hai apna aaj,,, jo fir se hua lachaar...

    Jisme bacha hai to sirf,,, Gareebi, Beruzgari aur Bhrashtachaar...

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  20. Thought-provoking one !

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  21. We want such more & more from you .
    you are our voice &

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  22. Very intriguing sir.Wanna share something
    Darpan Mere Mann Ka Soona Pada Hai Dekho
    Aasha ki Dori Choote
    Gehre Kaara Hai Rasta
    Khilkhila Rahi Hai Duniya
    Par Main Shunya Ban Chuki Hoon
    Bikhar Ke Is Zameen Pe
    Shakhon Se Hi Bichad Ke
    Ro Rahe hain Kitne
    Sapne Mere To Dekho

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  23. Speechless...!!!! anothr talent...........!!!! :)

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  24. u r super talented person, ur word selection is amazing.... representing the real and truth... i feel their are v.less people in B-town who r true honest pure feeling ... i found after a long time u are the one. ... be what u are..... keep smiling ... ur smile steals the heart of everyone... u r really nice guy.. love u and god bless u... i wish u may go v.high same time being ur feets grounded

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  25. d name itself describes it ,,,ayushamnn u r go blessed waheguru apko or uparleke jayeee u will be happiest man on earth ..love resepct

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  26. Love your poems Ayushmaan... appreciate in this poem how you managed to express a deeper thought with honesty...

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